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Old 06-20-2008, 12:57 AM
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to.die.for and xray queen, both of your poems are beautiful. You're both very talented.
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Old 06-20-2008, 12:55 PM
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MissFalcore, You did a great job. I really like the poem. It really stand out for itself.
lol i just thought WTF?? LOL...no no little Franzi is way too stupid to write such a kinda beautiful poems...i write stories but they're crappy lol
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Old 06-20-2008, 04:59 PM
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thank you guys
it's always a warm feeling to know that someone digs my poems out there
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Old 06-22-2008, 12:43 PM
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Something from me:

Trust's missing

Do you even know how to feel?
How to laugh
How to cry
How to see
With no eyes
How to love
Without a doubt
And how to talk
If it's allowed

If you say yes
I'll be jealous
Because I've lost the key
To my cellars
I've lost the abilty
To feel
And I've lost the last one
Of my wheels

But I lost the game
Called life - a shame
The knife - it's in
My Heart - a sin
It's hard to stay
There is no Way

That leads me
Out of this misery
Am I sick or desperate?
Or is this my fate?

What should I belive?
Tell me what should I belive in?
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Old 07-23-2008, 08:44 AM
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A beautiful poem Plotze.
Sometimes I feel the same way, to just don't feel at all.
and that there is no way to change it.

Here are some new poems I've wrote.


From Pacifistic Knight

A clash, two swords,
take a life to survive.
The battle over.
Easy as that?

I’ve seen them fall,
both cursed by the blade.
Cursed to die,
or cursed to live
for another fight.
It’s just the same.

Rain can’t wash away
the sins that stains the souls.
The blade never mend to endure ones hand.
So mine is buried under stone and sand.

With no sword to wield,
armed with heart and shield.
My eyes seek no victory.

A clash, my sword
buried in the sand.
A clash, my shield
Only my heart to defend.



A silhouette Of A Nightbird
Don’t give me wings,
if I’ll never learn to fly.
Don’t give me a voice,
if I can’t ask you why.
Don’t give me eyes,
when the world always hides.

Don’t tell me lies,
when the truth’s hard to hear.
Don’t ask me questions,
if the answer is what you fear.

Don’t turn away,
if you fear a goodbye.
Don’t fear the night,
If you live for the sky
and don’t waste your feathers
if you know how to fly.
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Old 07-25-2008, 06:23 AM
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You're all such good poets! :D The poems you're writing are so full of beauty
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Old 07-25-2008, 09:09 AM
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Just a little piece but oh well....


I am drifting apart,
can't you see my arms
reaching out to you
talking the unheard truth.
It hurts when I see you,
All I did was being near you
But it riped us apart
And I fell into the dark
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down here where the rest of us fell
waste away nothing left to show
while I'm in this perfect hell

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Old 08-06-2008, 07:57 AM
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I feel this night is getting dark and long
Even the moon,seeming to embrace the world with its pale,white brightening shine
but it doesn't brighten me,in any way
I want a cigarette now
to feel something else than emptiness,this nicotine being so present on my lungs
just wanting to get a step back
The flood of thoughts reaches my mind,it's done
the state of mind I tried to avoid but there's no cigarette
and now it's here,again so violently present
I could cry and shout for help
I could kill myself for just not having to feel this fear deep in my heart
Is this pain and incredible fear really about to end?
Do I really get the chance to take a long breath without any hurry?
Slowly but yet fast, a smile comes upon my face
Dreams I thought I could barely realize seem to wait in front of me
I just wait to close this door where a world of fear,loss and pain spins its webs
and try to open the one in front of me,that now appears
though I have no clue what could be behind it...
Just about one thing I am sure about that awaits me ...I will stay alone.
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Old 08-10-2008, 05:42 PM
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Well, this is something I wrote in german (my mother tongue) but i put up the translation here ... (if someone wants to read the original, i´ll post it)

Do you believe in dreams?
Do you believe in freedom?
Do you believe we could celebrate it?
Do you believe we could live our dreams in freedom?
Only you
Only you
Only you and me
Different
AND PROUD OF IT!
Insane
But everything is well planned
We run
Hand in hand
With no limits
Across the whole land
Over rocks and over sticks
Always right before them
- Always away from them
And if they should get us?
And if they push us close to the abyss?
-Plan B:
We make one more step, a little step backwards
They won´t get us
Not alive
Never
Nobody will tear us apart
Noboy will get us back
Never
Take my hand
And hold it tight
- Tighter.
And run, run, ... faster!
We still are ahead of them
They still think we lie in our beds
And dream
But we don´t dream anymore
We LIVE
Wild, differeent, dangerous
Hanging in the balance
At the abyss, prepared to jump
- Together
If there is no other way
No more alone
No more suppressed
No more being silenced
We shout
You and I
You and I
Hand in hand
With no limits
As fast as the wind
Across the whole land
Laughing, screaming, singing
And finally
FREE
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Old 08-11-2008, 09:46 AM
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^i really like it..and i'm interessted in reading it in german
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Old 08-13-2008, 05:25 PM
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Thanks a lot
Here you go:

Glaubst du an Träume?
Glaubst du an Freiheit?
Glaubst du, wir dürfen das beides erleben?
Glaubst du, wir zwei dürfen unsere Träume in Freiheit leben?
Nur du
Nur du
Nur du und ich
Anders
UND STOLZ DRAUF!
Wahnsinnig
Aber alles ist gut durchdacht
Wir rennen
Hand in Hand
Ungebannt
Durchs ganze Land
Über Stock und über Steine
Immer vor ihnen her
- Immer vor ihnen weg
Und wenn sie uns kriegen?
Und wenn sie uns an den Abgrund treiben?
-Plan B:
Wir machen noch einen Schritt, einen kleinen Schritt zurück
Sie kriegen uns nicht
Nicht lebendig
Niemals
Niemand wird uns trennen
Niemand wird uns zurückholen
Niemals
Nimm meine Hand
Und halt sie fest
-Fester.
Und renn, renn … schneller!
Noch haben wir einen Vorsprung
Noch denken sie, wir liegen in unseren Bettchen
Und träumen
Aber wir träumen nicht mehr
Wir LEBEN
Wild, anders, gefährlich
Aufs Messers Schneide
Am Abgrund, bereit zu springen
-Gemeinsam
Wenn es sein muss
Nie wieder allein
Nie wieder unterdrückt
Nie wieder stumm gemacht
Wir schreien
Du und ich
Du und ich
Hand in Hand
Ungebannt
Schnell wie der Wind
Durchs ganze Land
Lachend, schreiend, singend
Und endlich
FREI
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Old 08-14-2008, 09:49 AM
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the german version is even better^
i really love that poem and i hope i will feel free like that, too anytime
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Old 08-14-2008, 05:57 PM
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Thank you, MissFalcore. I´m sure, someday, everyone will be free... but I wrote this poem when I was really in love, it was about wishes, not about reality
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Old 08-21-2008, 10:52 AM
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I love all of the works that you have posted, everyone. I suppose I will post some of my poetry. I write when I feel something inside me, a restless something, that requires expression.

First, I am not crazy about this one.

no one ever talks to me
i fear this is the end
and all it would have taken
is for me to have a friend

as the lights begin to dim
for perhaps the last day
the curtain closes on a man
who somehow lost his way

look elsewhere for encouragement
as smile it leaves my face
and do me the kind favor
memories of me erase

i did not make a difference
although its true i tried
i loved and gave all that i had
and yes, its true, i lied

i tried to be the greatest friend
a person could e'er be
but in the end it was too true
no one ever talks to me

so whispers choke out one last phrase
to end this somber song
may all you do be ever blessed
and may your life be long

Second, I like this one better.

we rage against the dark inside
fierce battle with the light
and wish we had a better way
that we knew how to fight
torn by the winds of this mad world
hopes light dims from our eyes
and drearily we take each step
and whisper forlorn sighs
and still one day we know there'll come
this old beginnings end
and finally we'll have the chance
to start once more, my friend
so dance with me among the stars
in million years or three
but in the meantime pardon tears
shed at root of mankinds tree
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Old 10-14-2008, 12:38 PM
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so here we go new poem...

the season of your hunt has begun again
it's getting tight inside of me
and i cant flee
and i am alone
you creep me out
you suffocate happiness
you want to conquer the sun
you want it to be dark
and wasnt your name...
darkness?
you get me back,settled in
memories
i need to cry and shout
come back
you destroyed me
because i fell...down
and took the best out of me
and just left the worst inside of me
come back, i beg you
and show me how to function
in this ugly world...
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